But again, my mistakes are my best
lessons.
I had my flaws,
I had my flaws,
Which put me at least in trail of precision!
I had never been fine at following diktat,
I had never been fine at following diktat,
Yet I was not the same forever.
I may not be perfect,
I may not be perfect,
Yet I never left a prospect
I may not be a pristine,
But, I am not the fiend.
Its me , raising up with the new sun.
But, I am not the fiend.
Its me , raising up with the new sun.
I tried the dream of desire,
But could not face the defeat.
Sometimes I am hasty,
When I am lost.
I may have peccadillod,
But now I come clean,
Forgive my audacity,
I am a baffled friend.
When I am lost.
I may have peccadillod,
But now I come clean,
Forgive my audacity,
I am a baffled friend.
If you have the heart,
And the desire to exonerate,
And yet not to set me gratis,
From the belief you masked,
Even in adverse conditions.
If pardon is your word to break the silence,
I am loyal is what I stand dependable.
Couldn't resist commenting on your personal blog, on which I stumbled upon randomly ! Its a good one! But reading seems weird, with words like "peccadillod" and others where I have to google to see what they mean. They don't feel natural. Keep it simple! I think some lines are ambiguous or I didn't understand them as I was supposed to.
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ReplyDeleteAppreciate your interest for your honest comments. Surely would take them.
It is totally a piece to express out how an egoistic person feels to confess . Even minute of the minute things needs to be emphasized. It is an expression of thought. So right words are attempted to put there. BTW Peccadillo is the word to describe the fault or sin .All I can suggest keep reading to understand the gist . Anyways thanks for the suggestion :-)